Teen Poetry #5 |
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Stand By Him |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
touched you once loved you twice watched you more cold as ice seen you there your not here show no emotion heart stand still see your eyes they grow dim wish you wouldn't stand by him What is it you have to answer? |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
trying to hit me with the bat?...man that was some hard hitting poem (i can relate) ![]() [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
geez. that was pretty damn good. verrry enjoyable. thanks for the read. ![]() - jen so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow, that poem really is a slap in the face..i wish she wouldnt stand by him too after reading that! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
thank you, thank you...i do love to blow people away with just a few words ![]() i'll grace you with another bit of extraordinary writting later today, in the mean time, enjoy this one. What is it you have to answer? |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, i liked this 1 so much, its going in my library. Great job! ![]() ![]() Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
whoaaa thats really good! i liked it alot, keep up the great work i wanna see more! i like short poetry better too Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
oh man, wow that was great, i could totally relat to it. great work It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
really great job on this one, so simple yet so true...good job. ~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~ |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice poem, has a catchy rhythm to it. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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