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Teen Poetry #5

Here, I am for you

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2001-10-15 07:45 PM

Oh, so I do
Very much, miss you
To me, a great friend
Hopefully to the end

My heart, you did fill
And that part never did spill
Smile, you make me
Then I feel free

Support, you have shown
Our friendship has grown
Hope it’s not too late
To say this is great

Happy, I hope you are
If not, I am not far
Be here, I will be
I hope you can see

If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear. I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips. -Ender

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2001-10-15 08:30 PM

That's great.
I have no constructive critiques or anything so..
Bel

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

2 posted 2001-10-16 11:48 AM

i just wrote this poem cause my friend was having problems with her friends and all.....i like the style personally...its a challenge...which i like

If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear. I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips. -Ender

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2001-10-16 08:41 PM

Nice! This poem is great! Short but sweet. C Ya.

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