The eyes (repost from Teen #4)

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Teen Poetry #5

The eyes (repost from Teen #4)

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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0 posted 2001-10-15 11:06 AM

The Eyes.

As I gaze into your eyes
I see a love that’s true
As I peer into your eyes
I find your heart is blue
As I wander in your eyes
I gain a hidden beauty
As I look into your eyes
loving you is my duty
As I float amidst your eyes
I feel I must confess
As I walk amongst your eyes
I find no wilderness
As I sail upon your eyes
I find a raging sea
As I dive into you eyes
I see your love for me
As I delve deep into your eyes
I wonder what i’ll find
but I needn’t look in to your eyes
to see that you are blind.

My all time favourite poem by me...

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-10-15 11:20 AM

Eyes are the window to your soul....beautiful piece

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-10-15 04:55 PM

i can see why it is your "all time favorite"...what a beautiful write...and the last line...wOW.

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