Teen Poetry #5 |
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Sad Clown |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA ![]() |
Howdy. This is a brand new kind for me... I got bored one night, so I figured I'd try the style. I don't think it's very good, but you can let me know what ya think about it... ![]() SAD CLOWN Sophisticated Amazing Daredevil Constant Lonliness Opened a Wavering New life - Cody - |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Ohh... I get it now! Took me a minute... I like it, but it confused me a bit... Wait a sec... doesn't confuse me now... I get it!!! Great write!!! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Interesting on so many levels Codes. Nice job of doing an acrostic. You should try doing them more often. ![]() ~AF~ "I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you" |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
clowns scare me ![]() Nice change in your writing...good job on the poem! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Personally I like it a lot and I think that you did it very well. It's always nice to try something new. ![]() There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for. |
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