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Knight of Secrecy
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2001-10-13 03:22 AM

Here goes, 2nd post

Quest for your target
just a small child
looking for his life
hijacked souls
lost between faith & war
pedestrians of my imagination
innuendos of a time,
comes and goes the madness
it camps in me
beyond you'll still see the darkness,
the vision is delayed
its life strays wild,
as the spoiled child grows...

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2001-10-13 06:27 PM

I really enjoyed the read, it had a similar feeling to the first but was a great read

May I encourage you to post replies to other peoples poetry as you may get more replies

Zu

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-10-13 11:56 PM

I like the format and the wording you use! This one's really great!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

Knight of Secrecy
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-10-16 11:16 AM

ok thanks for the comments
-CM.

rolly_polly
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since 2001-10-10

Posts 41
puerto rico

4 posted 2001-10-16 05:35 PM

Hey buddy! As always it's a pleasure to read yer work...i thought u did a great job on this one, again i love the format.SEE YA!

~parallel universe~

Knight of Secrecy
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-10-23 06:29 PM

I bet no one knows what this poem is about, well, you may notice its about the september 11 tragedy, if you read it you'll notice.

-CM.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-10-24 10:37 AM

Interesting read, you got me thinking
thanks for the share

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-10-26 02:00 PM

Wow....i dont even really know what to say about this...jus wow....

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

8 posted 2001-10-27 01:52 AM

Hey this reminds me of some people I know.

Some interesting thoughts have jumped out of my head right about now. Thanks for posting such a thought provoking piece.

~AF~

"Live life to the fullest (unless you can't be stuffed)" - Merrick

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