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0 posted 2001-10-11 01:27 AM


fatally addicted
A huffer
on the corner
with his
bottle of lysol.
Nothing to his own
except the shirt on his back,

fatally Addicted...

What can you draw from this, love?


- jen


so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (edited 10-11-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-11 08:07 AM


this is so true...and that's sad.  

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2 posted 2001-10-11 10:08 AM


Thats a really sad poem but unfortunately all too true...nice job
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3 posted 2001-10-11 07:08 PM


i really shouldn't say this, seeing as poetry should be interpreted by the reader, but this isn't about a huffer.

though you probably noticed already.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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