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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-10-07 01:02 PM

Your touch so gentle,
your voice so sweet.
I wish we could stay here forever,
here, with your arms wrapped around me.

Soon, I hope you'll see,
that you're the one for me.
My feelings for you are so clear,
I don't want them to disappear.

These emotions you have me feeling,
I'm finally giving into you.
I wanna be part of something,
that something happens to be your love.

I want you to open my heart's door,
'cuz I don't want to be lonely anymore.
I want you to be the person I call,
I want you to be the one to catch me if I fall......

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me
~I'm breathing u ing and i'm breathing u out!~ 7channels

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 10-07-2001).]

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2001-10-07 01:48 PM

I really enjoyed this poem, thanks for the great read and be sure to keep on posting your work

Zu

"Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT"
- Replying might be your only hope of getting noticed -

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-10-07 07:55 PM

Awwww!

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-10-08 08:57 AM

I ditto skyfire.

Awwwww...

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2001-10-08 09:12 AM

thanks, i'm glad u all liked it....

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me
~...I can be ur hero baby, I can kiss the pain away...~

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

5 posted 2001-10-08 05:56 PM

This was a good poem! This explains exactly how I feel about a 'certain someone'! hehe

Keep on writing!!!! lylas ~Jess~

~*~How can we be friends if everytime I think of you I know that's all we'll ever be~*~

Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

6 posted 2001-10-08 07:07 PM

o eeeeewwwwwwwww lol jp this is a really kewl poem!!! hey i finally replyed and im goin to ur other poem RITE NOW so u can stop bein all mad cow on me now!!

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
~*Krista*~

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