Teen Poetry #5 |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
some were like you cold between morning and the frost of kisses dreams bloom above a sleepcloud heavy with music taste naked sound me |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Oooooo i liked this one a lot!! I liked how you formatted it and how the words swerved and curved and stuff lol..Kisses..absolutely wonderful job on this poem! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, this is very good, just easy on the naked stuff, we have some young readers ![]() |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
thanx for the responses...sorry 'bout the naked part...but i swear it wasn't sexual...it's naked as in pure...stripped of everything else...not even music anymore...just sound...but i'll be better next time me |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that is very good. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
*big smile* I love this Pharon! wow.. it's just.. sweet. ![]() Keep posting, k? Sarah *the chains which once held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
whoa! this is SCHWEET i LOVEEEEEEEEEE THIS!!!!!! "If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. You are an amazing poet....very well expressed. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
well done! your creative word format is always a pleasure to read. =) |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
it's simpleish, but i like it a lot. i love the title you chose. rockin' poem. __o0o_Anna_o0o__ *waves* Friends are angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Pharon nicely done. This poem just "feels" right. I second Javi, you are an amazing poet. "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
i third you both- youre coughing up good stuff here pahron. i enjoyed this one immensely- like sugarhigh said- it curved nicely like kisses ![]() see the glass crack like a flower opening |
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