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Teen Poetry #5

Confidence & Fear

Jessica

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since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

0 posted 2001-10-03 05:35 PM

Confidence & Fear

Once again the silence whispers
Peircing hushes cramp my thought
Holding on so tightly to nothing
My final hour you've sought

Let me be in my dispair
For I do not wish to breath
Don't bother to catch me
I won't blame you if you leave

Again I am drownding aloud
In my mind of emotions deep
So quietly remaining happy
Only in my blissful sleep

Cold as ice, my heart bleeds fire
Alone with confidence & fear
Turning together I forget
Exactly why I'm here

[This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 10-03-2001).]

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

1 posted 2001-10-03 05:56 PM

Good poem, I like the last line, but this whole situations sucks. But goodluck to the both of you, be civil.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-10-04 02:07 PM

Great piece but I feel for you being in this situation. The feelings that came across were so strong and actually brought me off my happy cloud.

Well done on the write and I hope things improve for you soon.

~AF~

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-10-04 02:34 PM

Jessica, this is really good
I see you've been practicing

Such an emotional piece
thanks for sharing again
hope to see more in the near future

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-10-20 12:21 PM

Hi Jessica #2...Late reply...I know...But you'll get over it lol

Where have ya been on ICQ? Check in with me- tell me whats up and how things are...
From the looks of the poem...not so well. Your emotions/feelings came across perfectly...Loved this piece, Jess!

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

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