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Teen Poetry #5

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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-09-29 05:39 PM

Ok, this is one of my shorter ones...haven't been writing much - been thinking about what happened 9-11...

You stare into my eyes
And whisper you love me
A smile graces my lips
As I say the same
You put your arms around me
As we sneak away
To be alone for a while
Looking in each others eyes
Looking for the soul
Behind the love we share . . .

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2001-09-29 05:55 PM

AWWWW how very sweet this one is! Liked it muches! I believe everyone was affected by 9-11... it was awful, and it makes you think. Be strong!

Jenn

"In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-10-01 08:05 PM

This is probably your best poem yet.
I'm actually really amazed with this one
I see a lot more maturity in it
Thanks for the read and keep em coming

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

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