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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC 
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I asked my lucky star tonight to make my wish come true, I must have not wished hard enough, For I am still missing you. With every day that passes by, I try to forget your smile, Your gentle touch and tender kiss makes each passing day worth while. I wish that I could hold you tight for a breif moment in time, To be able to say you were with me, and to say that you are mine. The star I wished upon tonight didn't make my fantasy come true, Because you are still so far away and I am still missing you. ______________________________________ Hey guys yeah i know it has been awhile but im kinda still a lil scared to post on here hehe but o well .. either way .. i hope you enjoy !~Andrea~! |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
 Thanks fer posting Andrea!!! {btw did i mention my first kid is gonna be named Andrea...Andrea Summer Anderson..hehe} anyways I really really really liked this piece!!! thank you so much fer posting! "I swear officer! It was PINK." |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hey, This poem was great! I really liked it.. I think I liked it so much, cuz i can relate, besides the fact that this is really good! I know what you mean my ex b/f He was the guy that people say in the sayn you will never forget your first love!! Well he i will never forget, and everyday when i hear his voice on the phone I still get the same old butterfies in my stomach haha.. but I will just have to learn to get over it!!! But besides that it was a very nice poem and don't be  to post on here, everyone is friendly.. but I know how it is, sometimes I don't know if i should or not!!!! Thanks for the read!!Always, Amanda If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
First of all, what do you mean by you're still scared to post in here? Lovely poem, hope your yearning would soon be satisfied Good luck in the future and keep wishing they do come true  thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea hun why r u scared??? N e wayz this is a really good poem bu i am sorry that your still missing him so much...i hope your star gets ur wish right one night |
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rolly_polly Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41puerto rico |
hey i'm new here but i just wanted to say this was a nice piece of work ...i thought u did a good gob in expressing what yer really feeling...i hope all gets better for you tho, hang in there!   |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hey Andrea  Not my FAVORITE of yours...But still high on my fav. scale...Nice write! *Hugs* Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
hope your wish comes true soon, truly a beautiful poem. no need to be scare when you write like this Charisma |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Wow, that was a good poem. I can match that feeling write now, great write. |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
i really like this one. i read it to a friend of mine and she said "it hits the spot". so many of us can relate to this in so many ways. it flowed very nicely and it was well written. you made two people very happy with this one :-) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
sniff, sniff! Awesome, and so sad and loving, and... yeah. Awesome! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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