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the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-09-28 04:10 PM

when I say that I love you are my words true
is there more there to loving you
could I spend all that I have on you
or will my words fall short and be too few
it hurts sometimes when oyu love one so much
that when they cry you feel their pain and such
to know that they are hurting insyde
for it is in you that they confide
to know that they regret so many things
but yet they are the reason that your heart sings
cant understand, it drives me insane
but @ the same time it provides much gain
it causes me to love you all the more
for the fact I don't know what's in store
If I said I loved you would you believe me
and could you say that you truely loved me
or shall I wait for those words to come
and in the mean time keep acting dumb
and know I know the meaning of the old saying
"Love Hurts", I know they werent' playing
anyways before my words become to long
I'll let you know in my heart is where you belong
I'll try to love you like my God loved me
and then maybe one day you can finally see
that I can only dream is, me loving you and....
you loving me.

we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

1 posted 2001-09-28 05:34 PM

ohhh i really liked this piece very much, its the best ive read today. it expresses very well!

"I swear officer! It was PINK."

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2001-09-29 05:14 AM

hmmmmmmmmmm i know the feeling. i think i once told someone the same thing. i loved it jimmy. maybe sometimes that dream is all we can have of the person we love. not always do we get love that person they way we want. i hope i made sense.
robin

no officer i wasn't the one that ran up to acire and javi and kissed them than ran away it was that girl *points at lizzy*

[This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 10-01-2001).]

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-09-29 11:34 PM

I know the feeling but I hope everything gets better for you I loved this poem.
Lauren

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-10-04 07:43 AM

Beautiful piece, Jimmy. I hope whoever this is about appreciates what you feel for them.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-10-04 08:51 AM

Love has no boundaries...u can never love someone too much i dont think...this was such a beautiful poem..i really liked it

Keep up the good work!

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