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Teen Poetry #5

Imprisoned Mind

TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-09-28 12:54 PM

I sit here waiting patiently
My mind a prison in which I just cannot break free
The thoughts so dark are haunting me
Even when I think of you
My mind still won't release me to you
For some aparant reason this is tearing me apart
Can't say the things I want to say to you
I guess Iam just to scared too confide myself in you
These thoughts so intense I feel as if Iam in my own hell
Being tortured with such vivid thoughts of you and him together
How could you do this so promiscuously
You ripped my heart out, and just barried me
In this prison which I now reised within
These thoughts are killing me, all because of your sin and uncaring ways for me
Yet you have no remorse, no sign of life within you soul
Your the one who's always been in control
So let me out I ask will you please free me from this place
You obviously lost all your need for me

[This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 09-28-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-28 01:03 AM

this is painful and sad, I hope you are ok, hugs to you

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-09-28 11:38 AM

Whoa do i know how you feel..i feel like i should print this out and give this to my boyfriend to explain everything thats going on w/me...wow...great job!

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