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Zengo
Junior Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 31
Rogersville, AL

0 posted 2001-09-23 12:44 PM

Forward and back again,
Forward and back again,
She pulls me a step closer,
With all she has to offer,
A hug and kiss,
Just to take a step back,
Forward and back again,
Pushed away once more,
The never ending cycle,
She does, but she don't,
Forward and back again,
Isn't I love you enough,
To break the cycle,
And start the bliss again,
For once let something,
Other than you mind choose,
Forward and back again,
Isn't I love you enough.....

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-09-23 12:52 PM

I love you isn't always enough. For some people that is the thing that makes them take those steps back in the first place. This might be the case. Fear of getting hurt, who knows?!

I liked the repetition in this. It seemed to read like a song for me. Call me crazy.

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-09-23 01:16 PM

very well done

I say you take a step back and let her think about that one......

XFalloutX
Junior Member

since 2001-05-13

Posts 31
NC

3 posted 2001-09-23 01:18 PM

I liked it alot its really good. I know the feeling.
Later

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

4 posted 2001-09-23 07:00 PM

Wow~
It's hard to be in relationships. Sometimes you don't know if you want the trouble that comes with all the good times too. It's always been a roller coaster for me too. Sorry your heart is caught. I hope things get better!
Chelsea

If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see.

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

5 posted 2001-09-23 08:29 PM

"Sometimes love just ain't enough"

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-09-24 09:59 AM

Oyy reading this poem made me dizzy! Forward and back again....forward and back again...how confusing and tough to deal with!! I hope everything gets figured out..i liked the poem! Keep writing

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

7 posted 2001-09-24 07:09 PM

awwww
some relationships suck dont they?
i like this poem..im puttin this in my library..

"I swear officer! It was PINK."

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

8 posted 2001-09-24 09:42 PM

Loved the poem. I really get ya.

I'm a professional happy puppet.

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