Teen Poetry #5 |
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Depression |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
the sickness evolved into.... something more. a sadness so deep, it's completely UNEXPLAINABLE. it slowly crept upon me, like a maddening DISEASE. life had no more meanings, love no longer EXISTED. will this ever end? or will it lead into INSANITY? i'm not sure of these answers, but i wish i could find them soon QUESTIONS. Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?..... |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Hey! You know I love ya mon! ![]() ![]() ~*~Life is only worth living once if you've found someone worth dying for~*~ |
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SunShine913![]()
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
I loved this poem .. but i hope your ok and like Jess said hope you dont go insane.. but im here if you want to talk to !~Andrea~! |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey hey, good poem...fulla strong emotions. depression is pretty annoying, eh? oh well...at least if you go insane you can still write poetry?? just a thought...j/k. i hope you feel better. smile? -bergundy- i'm a penguin! i'm a penguin! i'm a cute lil penguiiiin! i'm a penguin i'm a penguin! i eat FISH!--tis the pretty penguin song |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Insanity is a good way to describe depression in my feeling cuz i often do feel as though i am going insane while i am in the midst of struggling with it...very real poem..if you ever need to talk please e-mail me...::hugs:: |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Interesting poem. It goes lightly into thoughts a lot of people think about without being overbearing. Well done. I hope things begin to look up for you soon. If not, you can always email me and yab for a bit. ![]() ~AF~ "Hi there, can I relay a sonnet your way?" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good luck in finding the answers to your questions. I thought this poem was nice. Powerful. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks 4 the replies, i appreciate them alot. sometimes i wonder about my mental health ![]() luv much, ![]() Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?..... |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
AAHHHH staci!!! lol u better not mean that I drive u insane!! lol jp hey this is a really good poem ok well im gonna go read ur others now if i can cuz im in shool lol We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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