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thinking of you |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC 
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All I do is think of you. When I close my eyes I see you, Holding your arms out to me And me, walking into your strong hold. But then I open my eyes Realize it's just a figment of my imagination. I guess when I close my eyes I see my deepest desires. Only one thing remains the same... I love you, and I always see you. Everytime I close my eyes I feel your warmth next to me. Everytime I close my eyes I feel you breathing behind me. Everytime I close my eyes I feel you holding onto me. Everytime I close my eyes I feel your gentle kisses on my shoulder. But when I turn to hug you; When I open my eyes to see you; When I'm ready to kiss you, I feel no one there. I see no one there. And the only thing my lips touch Is the gentle breeze passing by. _____________________________________________ Hey you guys yes it is me and yes i posted again .. i guess you can say i just cant stay away from you guys lol !~Andrea~! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Aww... It seems like you miss him ALOT! (understatement of the year). Hey.... I can post replys! Yay! Did you ever think that that passing breeze was his feelings crossing the ocean to come to you? Well, I hope you get to see him soon, these poems say you love him very much. Thanks for the great write! Rich Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
...such beauty with sad tone within it...i REALLY liked this piece...enjoyed...and glad that you are satying and posting again...keep it up, Andrea..  if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwwwwwwww andrea! this was so sad  dagnabit where are my tissues!?! i really liked it.very well done!robin bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura,andrea,jessa and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That is really a beautiful read. made me sensitive to what you feel thanks for sharing keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh wow Andrea. How much more emotional could you want to get?! Such sadness yet such beauty...you've captured everything in this. The longing, the sadness and the imagery is wonderful. Well done on this. I hope you will be with him soon. ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Very Sad The emotions are wonderfully captured. I feel for you. Ex Animo, Aaron |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Bum me out why don't ya, Andrea...  VERY beautiful write...I enjoyed it bunches! Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the tender love shows so clearly, so sweetly. fantastic!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sniff, sniff* that was just so sweet!!! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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