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luckyducky_505
Member

since 2001-04-29

Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

0 posted 2001-09-17 03:16 PM

Forever to be you promised,
No matter what we were best friends,
I guess that was all a lie,
Because what you are is not a friend.

You are only there when she's not around,
When her friends can't see you,
When people aren't looking.

You didn't call me everyday,
It's pretty bad wehn your brother has to say:

"Jonathan, you don't deserve a friend like her but yet there she stands and waits. She's waiting for you to talk to her when ever she needs you. She needs you now but you're not there so in return she leaves in tears never to bother you again."

You know he's telling the truth,
You begin to run after,
But she grabs by the arm and tells you to come on.

I want you to be the guy you once were,
The guy I once knew,
I once trusted,
I never felt so blue.

I think it's pretty bad that even on your birthday I can't give you a hug.
I had this all planned out,
But I just waved and mouthed "Happy Birthday, Hun!!"

~I wrote this off the top of my head today. I couldn't even get outta bed until noon today because I was still crying and hadn't slept a wink. My mom is the best for letting me stay home today.~

Smile -- because you never know who's falling in love with it.

When you dream you imagine and when you imagine you dream!!

[This message has been edited by luckyducky_505 (edited 09-17-2001).]

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2001-09-17 04:39 PM

I really liked this one, and you made me sad. i think I'm gonna cry!

this is such a sad situation, best of luck to you.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-18 01:55 AM

Ouch...this doesn't sound too good at all. Hope you'll be alright.

You've expressed your emotions nicely and the piece ran together fairly well.

Take care and keep sharing.

~AF~

*slaps her knee* Well Gee Golly Pete!

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2001-09-18 03:20 AM

This was well done. Just nicely written!
robin

bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura, and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha

a.k.a.maLa
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 15
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-09-19 07:59 PM

leaves something to be desired

good form

good feelings

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-09-20 11:12 AM

Ugh...so many things change that u wish would stay the way they use to be forever...its up to him to patch up the lost time and the hurt feelings..not coming to his defense or anything but i can imagine he feels torn between you and his gf b/c he's prolly trying to make everyone happy..you need to tell him how you feel otherwise you might be loosing out on a very special friend...hope everything turns out ok...i really liked the poem and how you expressed yourself

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