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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Everytime I think of you, My muscles tense and I feel weak, You have a magic power, For some reason you don't seem to leave, Your time isn't worth it, Only wasting it on nothing, What you are doing is confusing me, This leaves me puzzled, You stay, Even though it would be best if you were gone, But, would it really? Nothing can do anything for me, Not anymore, What has happened to me? Without you I'm deeply sad, With you my sun shines a million times brighter. ~*~Life is only worth living once if you've found someone worth dying for~*~ |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, jess, i liked this one...nice write..lylas  And I'd... give it all away |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem i really liked it!! keep up the good work. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Growing dependent on someone to such a degree was bound to take its toll eventually. I just hope that things will be alright with you. nice piece.  ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I believe you should show this person this poem. It is straight to the point and easy to understand. Hope things are ok now Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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