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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-09-13 06:58 PM

Walking the street in the hollows of night,
Invisions of silence in my sight.
Listening for the rising tide,
As I prepare myself for my last ride.
Glancing at the stars that go by,
Sitting listening to myself sigh.
Remembering all the times I tried,
As I prepare myself for my last ride.
The thrill to kill I know you will,
Feed the rush when all is still.
Forgetting all the times you lied,
As I prepare myself for my last ride.
Glistening in the sun,
Nowhere left to run.
Too late to try and hide,
As I prepare myself for my last ride.
No more worries of the durranged,
Untimely events already arranged.
Just set forth with a big stride,
That's the end of my last ride.
just a little goodbye poem i suppose

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

1 posted 2001-09-13 06:59 PM

*is really sad now* first the terrorists, now this? Will the sorrow ever stop?

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-14 03:05 AM

It is sad to see you're leaving. First the note in Teen Explorer, now the goodbye poem. Not a good thing at all.

I do like the way you've called your experience a ride. It's a good way of looking at it.

Take care and keep writing.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-09-14 08:00 AM

PLEASE DONT LEAVE!!

This was a really good poem!! It really expressed where your coming from very nicely..i loved it although im extremely unhappy about what its written about

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-09-14 04:32 PM

this was really really good~just dont follow through mmk?

Great poem

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

5 posted 2001-09-14 05:23 PM

An amazing poem, I liked it very much, though the actual story it tells and the sadness I see written between the lines worry me. I've read your other works and it will be a great loss to this site and it's readers should you leave us. So I think I speak for everyone when I say please don't go. You keep writing, we'll keep reading, and we're here for you if you need advice on more than a poem, a just a shoulder to cry on.

punkrockerrobin