Teen Poetry #5 |
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Breething deeply, walking backwards |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
Theres life between my tears Cuz' I've been sitting here for years I gave here all my love, But I guess that wasn't enough She took my heart and ripped it out Her lifeless fingers moved about And I was torn to pieces Without a second glance You give her all a girl deserves Doing anything, sometimes losing your nerve You really want her to be happy So why cant you stop loving her You're friends tell you you were too good for her That your unconditional love, she didnt deserve Hey bud, its time too move on Anyone, where has my life gone? She hugs you, then walks away What is this game she plays Does she not care, does she think its cute It seems everyones been put on mute [This message has been edited by lil_pwheeler (edited 09-13-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, that is not cool. You should be cold fish and make her think......it does sound like she isn't worthy. ![]() ![]() |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
That is horrible hun! Im so sorry!! Some people...gosh i'd smack her around for you a lil if i could and knock some sense into her! I hope that you start feeling better...your better off w/out her even though that might be hard to see right now...::hugs:: |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Not a good situation at all. Mind you, this is the way of some people. The world would be a dull place if we all did the same things. All the same, it sucks for you. Take care and keep strong. ![]() ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"You're friends tell you you were too good for her That your unconditional love, she didnt deserve Hey bud, its time too move on Anyone, where has my life gone?" - Don't ya just want to smacc your friends when they say this stuff? I know I do. "She hugs you, then walks away What is this game she plays Does she not care, does she think its cute It seems everyones been put on mute" -PERFECT last line, oh I lovedit. I know exactly what ya mean! United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
good poem i liked it. keep up the good work. robin bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura, and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha |
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Alysia182 Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 19CT |
Breathing deeply Walking backwards Finding strength to call and ask her Roller Coaster, favorite ride Let me kiss you one last time Blink...you like them? I LOVE THEM!!! But anyways. Awesome poem. I know how it feels. Some day, you will ache like I ache! ~Hole |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
alysia, you confused me with yer post... anways! very cute poem! i loved it..and im sorry you feel this way! Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again! |
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