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Wasted tears |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
You make me happy, then you break my heart. One minute I can't stand you, the next, I hate being apart. You don't even have to speak, for me to know what you're saying. I hope, here with me, you'll be staying. At least let me enjoy it, while it's still there. This love, I've never known, another broken heart, I couldn't bare. Please don't say goodbye, please don't leave me here. Don't make me waste, another single tear........ Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life, so be wasted all the time and have the time of ur life!!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh I like this very much  |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
How sad. it's better not to waste tears on those undeserving of them. Having someone go is always tough but in the end, you are a stronger person for getting through it. Take care and thanks for posting. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This is exactly how I feel mon! It isn't even funny..these feelings are so overwhelming and sometimes they are just too much to handle. This was a good poem..loved it. Write more hehe lylas ~Jess~*~Life is only worth living once if you've found someone worth dying for~*~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Omg this is exactly how i feel right now!!! I think i have more of a conflict going on w/my heart though right now...I hope things work out!! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwwww how sad! i hope everything is ok. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"You make me happy, then you break my heart. One minute I can't stand you, the next, I hate being apart." I can relate bunches...Loved these lines! Listen to lizzy, she is wise beyong her years.  United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Sad read if I may say. I too agree with Lizzy You shouldn't stay with someone who wont treat you right thanks for sharing and keep em coming hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh, wow. I understand all of this. You've expressed everything very well here. I have no critiques, because I find it short, sweet, and beautiful. Great job. Jenn "You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it." |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sad poem I hope everything gets better fo you. Lauren |
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