Teen Poetry #5 |
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If only Heaven could cry ( Dedicat to those who lost their lives in the terror attack |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
If only Heaven could cry ( 2x ) You may be lost, But never forgotten. Always in our hearts, Through taking so sudden. A nation in grief Heartaches out across seas And God bless their souls May they rest in peace. Each and everyone. If only Heaven could cry ( 4x ) you will live on, in our me-mo-ries. Even know your gone, Your love will still breathe. A nation in grief Heartaches out across seas And God bless their souls May they rest in peace. Each and everyone. If only Heaven could cry ( 4x ) Praying for those who died For those who sacrificed their lives Praying for the family’s Who have lost their love ones. You may be lost, But never forgotten. Always in our hearts, Through taking so sudden. If only Heaven could cry ( 4x ) A nation in grief Heartaches out across seas And God bless their souls May they rest in peace. Each and everyone. If only Heaven could cry ( till fade ) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a beautiful dedication Hallucination. It's nice to see so many people care about the tragic events that happened. let's all pray for the souls of the departed And let's all pray for the families of the victims hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I read this before and couldn't find the right words to reply to it with. You've written about this tragic event in the most beautiful of words and this is one of the few pieces that actually moved me close to tears. It's so sad what you nearly lose and what you do in the end. Ditto to acire. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you for sharing.... my heart bleed along the words, my tears within Charisma |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Really beautiful poem. I don't know what else to say. Great dedication. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
I agree...it was a wonderful dedication. Very beautiful indeed. ...Don't know what else to say except that despite all the chaotic events that have taken place it's nice to see how it has truly touched us. Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
*sniffle* Very powerful, emotional poem. This really expresses the sorrow that all the nation is feeling now, and my heart goes out to all of the families affected by this insane act. ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
really beautiful Brian, very heartfelt and warm. thanks for sharing ![]() a |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
I liked this ver much I lost my auntie who was in the first world trade tower that got attacked I will remember this day forever, and im sure everyone else will to Let the souls of the innocent who died September 11/2001 rest in peace
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Such a beautiful dedication.... United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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