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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2001-09-10 07:35 PM

Here I am again inside me
Searching for what I’ve become
Places that I’ve been provide me
With the dreams I’m running from

Here I am again inside you
Searching for someone to hold
Dwelling on what I’ve denied you
Dreaming of us growing old

Here I am again in sorrow
Circles run me nowhere fast
Today goes on to be tomorrow
Tomorrow on to be my past

[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 09-10-2001).]

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

1 posted 2001-09-10 09:22 PM

wow...seriously...wow.

me

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-09-10 09:38 PM

LOVED the poem, especailly the last stanza kevin. i think you did an outstanding job with it. it. your thoughts were all nicely tied in with each other too. awesome poem, well done

- I stayed up all night playing poker with tarot cards. I got a full
house and four people died.

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2001-09-10 11:40 PM

Impressive writing. Good images. For some reason whenever I read your poetry, I get some very nice vibes and images. This was no exception. Keep up the good work.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-09-11 12:05 PM

nice poem.

"Dreaming of us growing old"

that made me

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-09-12 06:00 AM

This is a great poem, Kevin. Definitely a positive message at the end and it gave off a great feel. It read through quite nicely and had a simple but decent rhyme scheme.

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

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