Teen Poetry #5 |
Try so much, recieve so little |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
When I'm around you, everything else goes away, and all my thoughts, are of only you. When you look at me, with your pale blue eyes, I get lost in them, and you melt my heart. So much we flirt, yet so little we love, and so much I feel for you, and all this you know. Yet we don't go out, nor do we try, to tell each other, our true feelings inside. Try as I might, I can't get you, to love just me, or for you to even like what you see. ~death is certain, life is not~ |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
ugh..i feel bad 4 ya hun. don't worry hold ur head up high. remember guys are all a lil screwed up in the head juss think about the good things. remember there is better out there..i've found better and so can you. lylas :-D ~Jess |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
If things are meant to be between the two of you, they will happen. You can't fool around with fate because it'll bite you badly if you do. Just try to keep your head up though. There is a lot more to life than wondering why a person doesn't like us. nice piece. Full of emotion. Thanks for sharing. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ah i know the feeling SG, you really like each other but are too scared to make a move...you both enjoy each othres company but are too scared to take it further....like lizzy said..give it time, things will sort 'emselves out |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
The more i read your poems having to do with this person the more i realize what an awful situation your in...i really hope everything turns out alright...::hugs:: |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Blah to the predicament! Awesome write though. It's brewing over with emotion and feeling. Loved that. United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
A lot of people are hurting right now I hate that so much Just don't give up, you'll find someone someone who'll sweep you off your feet thanks for the read hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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