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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-09-09 11:42 AM

Sitting there,
atop the bleachers,
holding each other close,
keeping each other warm.
I look into your eyes,
you smile at me,
as I silently wish,
you'd reach down,
and slowly kiss me.
I can't stop these feelings of love,
that i have so much for you.
Every time I see you,
my heart skips a beat,
and butterflies gather,
in my stomach.
No matter how hard i try,
I can't stop you from being,
the player,
that you truly are......

~death is certain, life is not~
~How can we be friends if everytime I look at you I know thats all we'll ever be~

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2001-09-09 05:32 PM

oh geez...i know exactly wut your talking about. yes, i know how you feel and i wish for the same thing from you know who. i didnt know you felt this way..i mean like him that much. just remember once again wishes may come true and someday the true prince charming will get you someday

lylas ~Jess

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-09-09 06:09 PM

you did this really good.

I know what this feels like.....so glad I'm married now LOL

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-09-09 07:12 PM

don'tcha hate that? that you can't control your feelings no matter who they are for, whether it's your ex-bf's brother, best friends brother, jerks, or playas. but soon enough it'll work out, he'll either realize how he is or you'll find someone better to care for

good luck in the wait though... i know it's rough.

Valerie

"i'm supergirl, and i'm here to save the world, but i wanna know, who's gonna save me" - WNBA Commercial

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-09-09 07:15 PM

Well I know I hate that!

It sucks when this stuff happens....but i guess it just happens to all of us sometime.
Hope to see more of your work.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

5 posted 2001-09-10 12:35 PM

I was really feeling this one...and the feeling well..it sucks. Great write!
~Nikki~

Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it...

[This message has been edited by Shygirl82 (edited 09-10-2001).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-09-10 03:24 AM

DARRRRN!!!!!...*hugs*..the situation sux..it would be heartbreaking to know sumthing like that about the one you love. very nicely written SG. thanks for sharing

"Somehow I managed to single handedly betray myself" Javier Agosto

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-09-10 08:01 AM

I agree...the situation does suck and BELIEVE ME i kno what your going through!! ::hugs::

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

8 posted 2001-09-10 10:54 AM

Too bad about the situation. Learn from it and grow.

The piece itself was heartfelt and showed your emotions well. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

9 posted 2001-09-16 02:38 AM

Grrr, Know this all too well. Hope things get better for ya. *Hugs* Nice write.

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

10 posted 2001-09-17 06:22 AM

Tight poem...sounds all too common in this day in age.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

11 posted 2001-09-17 06:42 PM

hey, thanks 4 all the replies, i appreciate all of them , but i really dont think i'm gonna be the 1 coming out on top this time.....

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

12 posted 2001-09-17 09:12 PM

Very nice poem
I know how you feel!!!!!!

"Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!"
Travis Tritt

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