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CLBinLOVE
Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2001-09-06 09:20 PM

I.
Pre-dawn
derk;still
alarm clicks on
dog wakes me up
by prancing and playing
on me while i sleep
shower
warm; soothing
then a scamper to get to school

II.
The bell Rings
"the limit as x goes to y..."
or so the teacher starts
math should count as a language credit
AP calc, withc van and cory
cory is lost
van and i are struggling
cory can fend for himself
then homework til the bell rings

III.
Psycology
to know people
van and i chat
teacher jokes
notes and lectures
fill page and ear
sandy, van and i
always know what to say
that class is too short

IV.
English
"sitdown," not a request
so that class begins
we read and paraphrase
write and listen
am i the only one
who thinks tha old english is easy?
it would appear so
hunger slows the time til lunch

V.
Lunch
a continous noise
with continous lines
while people sit and talk
friends sit together
some dont have a seat
getting there late to find
friends have sat together
and left u out

VI.
Marching band
carrying a large brass tuba
in the sunbaked heat
learning music and motions
again and again
we'll get it right at the competitions
we hope
so we practice some more
the heat makes us want to get it right

VII.
the ride home
rain, heat, i go through it all
to be ther first to my car
ere there be traffic
i make my way home
with friends, maybe
maybe not
although the car is very hot
it feels good to leave school

"as below so above and beyond i imagine
drawn beyond the lines of reason
push the envelope, watch it bend"
--Tool

[This message has been edited by CLBinLOVE (edited 09-06-2001).]

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2001-09-06 09:51 PM

I responded to this last night I believe.
I think you got some typos psycho

Loooove,
Bel

[This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 09-06-2001).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-09-07 01:32 AM

oooooooooooooooooh very good write!..liked this one LOADS!...different to what we're used to seeing here in pip, but very good!!!

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anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-09-07 12:10 PM

Jeez..this is different and I LOVE it! It's a great walk through of what school is like for you. English teachers are usuall evil and always demand instead of requesting.

Thanks for the read. Can't wait to see more.

~AF~

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