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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-09-05 09:10 PM

It gets cloudy after a while
her smile reminds you of anothers smile
her eyes are just a bit more blue than the last
too many memories surface from the past
this song or that song brings them back
sad memories of the break ups attack

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶ØÊ†<

[This message has been edited by Poet on Acid (edited 09-05-2001).]

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-09-05 11:31 PM

Loved the last line. Ya know, I think I have a thing with last lines...for some odd reason I'm always loving them the most...Perhaps it's the closure? The final summarizing statement? Who knows... Anyway, Thanks for the read. It was much enjoyed, as always.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2001-09-08 01:31 AM

hey u haven't been on a few days so i figured i'd see if you wrote anything. i'm glad you did. it's cool, just too damn sad. oh well i guess. pretty poem tho, hopefully i'll talk to u soon.
luv
bergundy

i'm a penguin! i'm a penguin! i'm a cute lil penguiiiin! i'm a penguin i'm a penguin! i eat FISH!--tis the pretty penguin song

MindlessPoet
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

3 posted 2001-09-08 01:36 AM

short, but not bad

I can't personally relate though.. no one to break up with.. lol.

For now, all I can do is dream.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-09-08 03:03 AM

This poem is full of truth. Indeed smiles, faces and even songs do remind us of other people. It isn't too good at all. I personally will never view ice cream trucks the same way again.