Teen Poetry #5 |
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away from you |
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SunShine913![]()
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC ![]() |
every moment is spent in dreams now, for me, life only means that since you were in my arms I have dwelt among the stars shadows fly across the night cast away by the loving sight of you smiling in the light on the day you went away in my dreams, now, to my chest, my quilt I clutch in my sleep, I want so much to hold you again with no clear end no tomorrow, no good-byes no more lonely, aching sighs only a hope to find a place where I belong in the heart of your love song sing until we watch the dawn side by side in sweet dreams because the only part of life that's real is the way you make me feel that only part (my heart) longs to kiss you still (and will) on the day i leave to be with you ![]() !~Andrea~! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Awwww.... you seem to be lonely, but hopeful still! I know all about that. I know you will see him, and things will be good, as the poem's end implies. HeHe! It'll all be good. Rich Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"because the only part of life that's real is the way you make me feel" *Smiles* I loved that part...It made me feel warm and cozy and in such a familiar mood setting. Awesome write here. You'll be together soon and all will be perfectly devine! Thanks for the read! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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