I will always cherish you (not that good of a poem...I try though hehe)

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Teen Poetry #5

I will always cherish you (not that good of a poem...I try though hehe)

lilibeelee
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since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2001-08-31 01:27 AM

My mind speaks I love you
My heart speaks it too

My lips upon yours nothing greater nothing more
It makes me know what Iam here on earth for

You make me feel special and all so complete
I cherish your kisses they're all so sweet

I cherish your heart and handle with care
I want you to know I'll always be there

I cherish your love so sweet so grand
I cherish each touch of your hand

My lips upon yours makes me want to melt
When I kiss you I get a feeling I've never felt

I know this is right I know it in my heart
I knew I was in love, right from the start

When you speak your feelings it brings a tear to my eye
I lay alone at night looking at the stars in the sky

There is one star that reminds me of you
Right at that moment I know its all true

When Iam kissing you problems disapear
I feel so safe when you hold me near

When Iam kissing you nothing else matters

When Iam kissing you Iam at peace

I'll cherish you my darling angel

I'll cherish you my sweet baby

Forever and ever till eternity
forver and ever just you and me

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-08-31 01:37 AM

I know this is right I know it in my heart
I knew I was in love, right from the start

WOAH!...seeing my name EVERYWhERE like that made me really happy

i liked this one, you started off well but broke away from your rythm in the end. i thought you did well in conveying your feelings throughout it- so you're lacking nothing there

good post lisa i enjoyed reading this one lots!

............Daffodils
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Daffodils .............

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-09-01 03:52 AM

I really like this poems I think it's great keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-09-02 01:55 AM

"When Iam kissing you problems disapear
I feel so safe when you hold me near"

Awww, very sweet write. Sounds like you are one happy camper! Glad to hear it!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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