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Teen Poetry #5

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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-08-29 06:58 PM

Imagine two people
two short steps away
from an embrace...

   what yearns between us
    just under surface
     overflows in a gentle way
   our hesitation in evident
    yet the wanting
     pleasurably washes over us
   it seems we must be content
    to embrace each other
     with our eyes and minds
   yet, what a joy it has been
    to share this gift
     of holding one another visually

           ...I hope when I take
              my short forward step
              you, too, will take yours

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2001-08-29 07:07 PM

OOOhhhhh. Take the step! Take the step! Come on! lol This poem is very good, but I think I just told you that, didn't I? Oh, well, I just felt like replying anyway. This really IS good! Hope to see more.
Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

2 posted 2001-08-29 08:32 PM

yeah go for it take the step =o)...this was an ejoyable read thanks for writtin it

Eternal agony, invisions of carnage, needles stabbing you in the eye, this is what its like when doves cry

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-09-02 01:00 AM

Ok...Wow. I loved the whole entire concept of this one... Very well done here. You captured the feelings/thoughts/emotions ALL so well! So beautifully! This is a piece to be proud of!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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