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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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"In The End" a song by Linkin Park. The poem was insiperd by those thoughts. Enjoy "IN THE END" No matter what we do In life we will always fail Nobody gives a crap about anyone but themselves It's every man from himself, in our peaceful world When we say that selfishness is a sin we contradict ourselves How can we survive without our needs met before others Where can you turn? Who can you trust? the world breaks out into anarchy filled with nihlists who strive for destruction battling with the anarchists trying to prove that anarchists are not with nothingness We are all rats stuck within a box filled with a complicated labrynith Who can I turn to? my love? NO my friend? NO myself? NO With no one to turn to all that was once beautiful dies rainforests die people vanish animals on the verge of extinction eat the human carcass the bleak savage land that we all once called home Because when the comes again it never matters who you are because you're nothing nothing you have done will save you "I tried so hard and got so far but in the end it doesnt even matter I had to fall and to lose it all but in the end it doesnt even matter" Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
ooo heh i listened to the song when i was reading this. i LOVE linkin park! and i always enjoy readin ur poems, especially the ones inspired by my fav band :p this was great regina. 'i put my trust in u pushed as far as i can go for all this theres only one thing u should know' i love this song but thats my fav lil part in it. along with the chorus which u quoted in ur poem. great thoughts in this poem as always. keep it up hun! *hugs* tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
First of all, that's a good song.  Secondly, this is a good poem. Although I don't agree with the message, I think it's very well written. You did a nice job portraying your feelings, and that always makes good poetry. Well done. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
good thoughts in this. keep writing. ab *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
I miss linkin park at a concert, don't know much of their stuff, anyways i like this poem. i really enjoyed reading it. xscoutx |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the writing was nice...i liked that you write poems inspried by songs  ...great job on the poem...bye Ina  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is some powerful reading here, lady. Linkin Park (just thought that should be thrown in) and you've slotted parts of the song in with it nicely. Very well done, Regi. Once again, you have out done yourself. ~AF~ Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I liked the poem. I actually dont know the song, so I cant comment of that, but the poem was well written. *Amanda* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
INA INA INA You never cease to amaze me you have evolved to be this great poet keep it up girl keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Ina, Another great poem. Good song, great poem. I really, really liked it.It has a scary message but hey...Great wotk, this is what I love seeing from you, put out more soon. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
First i love Linkin Park! *L* and that song kicks some maja bootay! hehe and this poem is great! it is really powerful and does have truth to it as well. Nicely done! *Pixie*  -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That's so weird, I was just thinking about that song. I just copied it from my boyfriend and that's like all I've listened to since Saturday night. Great poem!  Bel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Linkin Park is ok...but i did like this poem Regi. You truly have ivolved into a true poet. Amazing job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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