Open Poetry #14 |
Warm Front |
RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Warm Front It lacks the tiger's tooth; The lightning strike of fascination; The suddenly embedded fang Of the quickly moving cold front. Instead, The warm air's mass Envelopes, Then swallows Like a python. RMW |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
*shudder* Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Amazing, and so right! THIS is poetry! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Good specific phrasing here. Kathleen Blake |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob...This poem makes me think, yes, that's just the way it is..but, I would never have thought to say it in such a unique way. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great metaphors used for illustrations Bob! As Martie says I wouldn't have thought of saying it the same way although I can relate to it for sure! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well....metaphorically speaking...I would have to say...well....poetically speaking, I would have to say....no.....as a reader let me just say I loved it...wish I could write like this |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I never knew weather could be poetic you proved me wrong. enjoyed the read "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I understand from a friend that your poetry is soon to end I shall miss your written verse if not a lady, I would curse! Come back soon, to join the fray bring your poetry and with us, play |
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