Open Poetry #14 |
What happens to love? |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
What happens to love, when one gives too much? Does it get spoil like a little child? Or does it wither away like a flower with too much water? Does it drown in deep oceans when the storms arrive? What happens to love, when you're not around? Does it miss you on cold nights? Or does it lies in a deathbed waiting for you to respond? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I think it does those things and beyond depending on the circumstances.....good poem!! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Yes, I believe "love" is an action word quite aside from a feeling or desire. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Just A Man Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 15Pain |
If I had the answer to that I would hang my shingle, and no doubt be the the most in demand advisor inthe world. Alas I do not,nor know I any who do. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Good question...good write! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Walker, This is one of those poems I will read over and over again, the questions are perfect ones to dwell upon, wonderful writing here, enjoyed much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I can so relate here...this is a good write. Enjoyed it! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
what a wonderful read Walker |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
sometimes it evaporates and dies from lack of nourishment... Kathleen Blake |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Sometimes I think it can do all of those things. Very very good write! I've really enjoyed your poetry. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
why does something have to happen to love..why can't it just be there always.... sighing ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh if only I knew...... Lovely, lovely poem (big hug) Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say. . . well. . . I don't know. . . that's the mystery. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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