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A World of Once Forgot
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A World of Once Forgot |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A World of "Once Forgot" Yesterday was drenched in thoughts, that held a rainbow's view. Whispered inner words to me arched upon the blue... Of skies, that warned of storms embrace, of after, thunderous roars. I held my own, but swam in tears, as rains began their pour. I question now, belief in self why others want control. Why is it that I gather moss, upon my very soul? Allowing, I, the sting of words, an oversensitive feel. Why am I now the me I am, drowning in my real? The journey ridden, exerted more than energy could stand. My face was flushed in rainbow reds so hot when touched by hands... That miss the warmth of caring words to touch the pain, to heal. Wishing you were here with me, your calming voice, I'd steal... Inside replacing all the hurt, the feel of loving's death. Needed, times of being held and fed beyond kissed breath. I'm rhyming, yes, I am today, but forced upon, it's not. My words have flowed from deep within a world of "once forgot". ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, Your words have poured upon the earth I'm sure a rose will show in birth. *L* Sy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just one of those days SY (sighing) ...actually I took my first long bike ride of the year, met someone to ride with, who coincidentally has the exact birthdate of mine...on the way back I got drenched by an unexpected downpur, .kind of refreshing, but the line "drenched in thought" stuck with me. I appreciate your kindness, always huggss ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Here's yet another I missed...this just FLOWED lady and your phrasing is gentle and delicate. Marvelous job.  |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh Wynter, gentle smile, what deep feeling you hold close and then let it flow out in a smoothness of melody. And, you know, people do care.. |
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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
nicest poem i have read today (sorry everyone else) pres |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great flow and rhyme. Funny how we'll see or hear something that triggers those memories for us isn't it? Great write, Wynter. All writing comes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
The sound of Forgetting is silence. No laughter or Tears to disturb The quiet eyes No haunting whisper To rattle chains In the dead mind No breaking heart To interrupt the Night’s stillness No passion To shake and rattle The bed of reason The sound of Forgetting Is silence… Shhh…. I am trying to Forget you As usual... I enjoyed your words |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And how glad we are that you "found" the forgotten |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
..the gentle smoothness of your words feels as silk against my skin,while at the same time the pain plays within. very good.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The easy flow of the words in this is truly remarkable....the pain and sorrow so well weaved into the lines with poetic soul searching....I couldn't pick out a verse I liked better than the rest....but this ending is a marvelous summation of your feelings...you're such a tender loving poet! "I'm rhyming, yes, I am today, but forced upon, it's not. My words have flowed from deep within a world of "once forgot"." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey serenity..thank you for finding this one it almost went to the world of forgotten poetry *s Logan You are very sweet, as a moonchild I am very moody and sulk a bit at times..it will pass pres56 your words made me smile today thank you for that huggsssss ~Wynter Thank you Lone Wolf yes words will stay in my mind til I at least place them in reserve *s C...you are so word talented...I always look forward to what you will post next  and I love this line:The sound of Forgetting is silence. Interloper You also, have a way with wirds, "I"... thank you very much for your constant support Fancy thank you..I enjoyed your response as well...*s ethome..sighhhhh..your responses are poetry to me huggzzzzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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