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Even When Nature's Not So Bright
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Even When Nature's Not So Bright |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Even When Nature’s Not So Bright Heavily laden skies chalky gray in disguise tepid breeze blows across this land I know Nature still thrives as the fowl tries to find special treats before the skies begin to leak A day to walk alone enjoying the calming tone of natures beauty deep collecting memories to keep Search for blessings in disguise knowing each a valuable prize ponder on my wants and needs asking God with gentle plead Thanking those in my life even when with heavy strife hoping in the very best please grant me loving rest This walk through natures prime has given my soul needed time to heal lowly thoughts and answers truly sought Even when it seems nature weeps at her seams you can make the very best giving heart and soul due rest By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This is so quietly beautiful, Cerenity, a inspiring read! ~Tier |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The imagery in this is superb. Wonderful write, Cerenity!  All writing comes |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm a great nature lover and I really appreciate a poem like this...Very very nicely done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cerenity...change "leek" to "leak"... enjoyed! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Cerenity- Beautiful flow and imagery. Loved this very much. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a beautiful and tranquil piece Cerenity ... thank you for this inspirational walk with nature. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, I agree with all of the above. You are a butterfly. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'A day to walk alone enjoying the calming tone of natures beauty deep collecting memories to keep Search for blessings in disguise knowing each a valuable prize ponder on my wants and needs asking God with gentle plead' So soothingly wonderful, Cerenity! I truly enjoyed reading this, and I intend to a few more times! Great poem! sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
IT is true that nature is not always kind, it just is. We can not control it therefore we must bend with it. Beautiful poem. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Wow to my surprize, Checking in to my favorite place I found such sweet replys to my little piece and it made me smile, thank you all so very much. Love, Cerenity |
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