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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
How I suppose to know, You will leave , How suppose I to know you don't love me, You are not the same person, I used to know, I should have known from the start, You are not the only one for me, No, you are not the one for me, How suppose to know you had lied me, and play a game with me, I was such a fool to fall in love with you, How suppose to know , You will break my heart In first place, And I will never your face again How suppose I to know you will leave me, How suppose I to know you were playing with my heart, I was a fool for you to fall In love with you? You say you love another and you don't love me, How suppose to know you will leave and break my heart In two [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sad and compelling. We never know. We can only take the chance. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very sorrowful Vandana ... you've captured these emotions well ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
So sad, Vandana, I can identify! I hope things work out for you soon! *hugs* ~Tier |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Such sadness and sorrow here, Vandana. This one brought a tear to my eye. Hang in there, my friend, you will get through it. I have walked in your shoes and the road will become clear for you in time. May God bless you. All writing comes |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
you described my soon-to-be ex-wife to a tee!...you know her?...sorry for your pain, but I can sympathize also...not much comfort, but thanks to loves elastic ability, we can try, try again to find someone special...just never give up! Love one another-let God do the worrying, |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Sad, sad poem, vandana, but you've expressed your emotions very well...very good write! sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written Vandana. enjoyed your poem. |
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