Open Poetry #14 |
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Two cans on the counter |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Two cans at the counter… for hearts wanting to do more while buying coffee from a corner store. Two cans with change meant to give away to those less fortunate, for those whom we pray. Two cans on the counter…. one for children abused, and neglected, the other for animals, hurt and rejected. To whom do we give when we have but one coin? To which worthy fight do we symbolically join? Two cans on the counter….. pick them both up, yes give it a try. For, each time I do, I can’t help but cry. Two cans at the counter, the children’s is light it is for the animals we’d much rather fight. Two cans on the counter……. But is there truth in a fight, where we don't see first the child’s right? Two cans on the counter, it’s always the same we give to the animals, leave the children in shame. ![]() I can't control my destiny I trust my soul, my only goal is just to "be" -Lyrics from RENT [This message has been edited by angelbear (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
sigh, so very very true, well said, well read...gentle smile |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nicely done ... a very poignant message angelbear. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Logan and Kit... Want to thank you both for responding AND for understanding my intent here. I always get nervous about this issue when I voice it...sometimes people misunderstand my views! Wasn't sure if it would come out correctly in poetry. Thanks for your comments. ![]() I can't control |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this touches me angelbear...yes..your message conveyed perfectly poetic form... as does your compassion and caring heart take care jm I'm not right ... you're not wrong ... |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes. I'm glad you had the strength to pen this piece. Well done. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Janet Marie and Interloper, Again I am so glad that the point is seen here. And your replies are greatly appreciated. ![]() I can't control |
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