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I Am.....Spartacus
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I Am.....Spartacus |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Tonight? I am without form I am Spartacus-- reborn... a sampling of your shadow self.. a lilting flute of playful elf... I am Janus of two faces the black-the white of chessboard spaces-- I am all and I am naught I feel free as I am caught with the steel trap on my shin- I chew my leg be rid of him. I howl a song of time's forlorn... I am Spartacus...reborn... and I will bite my teeth to bits... if only I be done with it... Hang me from my heart in tether? I swear I'll live like that forever and but my children would I mourn... I am Spartacus...reborn. (*repost from open....hmmm 11, maybe?) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes you are! Happy Birthday, Sparatus Kathleen Blake |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very exciting verses. Joyce |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmm. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I am remember this just as powerful second time round. Bumping this one to the top. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Powerful write! Here's to you Spartacus may a taste of freedom weather your final space and you can continue with the power from within! Wonderfully written! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
No ... I'm Spartacus - You gotta' love that line . Sorry, just had to say it, wonderful poem, a pleasure to read as always serenity . The theme of this poem is great, you have used the idea of Spartacus mixed with moving apart from a loved one very well . Be proud, Thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity , Wonderfulread here . Allow me to introduce myself .I got together with Doc and we both think this is great ( although he still thinks he's Fondofthis ) |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
serenity I thought this was beautifully written...Sue Suetang |
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