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PoemCrazy
Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159


0 posted 2001-06-02 11:52 AM


don't try to stop it,
you silly little boys,
with all your toys.

you think in one dimension,
not even a challenge,
for one who doesn't live there.

the momentum's already built,
it's all downhill from here.
don't fuss, sisiphus.

your labels mean nothing,
the New World is forming,
and it won't be stopped.

prophecy comes into play,
all the doors will open,
followed by the eyes.

inspired by a few songs:

http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/2DB6F52D8E0BA31D482568CD000AE278
http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/11C9FE7F8C30FBC9482568CD000BD5CA
http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/6DCFC0DBDC5EF442482568CD0003DBD2
http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/59542E12DF726691482568CD00051D4E
http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/570D69C1ABBC104B482568CD0005050A
http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/BBD16D88D89B96FC482568CD000AD0AB
now that's how to run a revolution,
but this is just poetry, a dream.
or maybe my name's right...tom

© Copyright 2001 Tom - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-06-02 11:55 AM


There's a definite theme of intense rebuttal in this piece. I hope we'll remain friends.

Powerful work!

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-06-02 12:01 PM


hmmmm, don't really know where you're coming from nor for certain where you're going, but by this powerful piece, I know you're on the move!

Nah, I'm not going to check out the songs, I'm a fuddy-duddy.  

Watersign6
Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
3 posted 2001-06-02 12:21 PM


read your poem an also the song lyrics an must say even though i dont know this artist
i like some of the lyrics an i really like
your original poem you have written with the
inspiration from those songs  

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