Open Poetry #14 |
poem - how revolting |
PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
don't try to stop it, you silly little boys, with all your toys. you think in one dimension, not even a challenge, for one who doesn't live there. the momentum's already built, it's all downhill from here. don't fuss, sisiphus. your labels mean nothing, the New World is forming, and it won't be stopped. prophecy comes into play, all the doors will open, followed by the eyes. inspired by a few songs: http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/2DB6F52D8E0BA31D482568CD000AE278 http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/11C9FE7F8C30FBC9482568CD000BD5CA http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/6DCFC0DBDC5EF442482568CD0003DBD2 http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/59542E12DF726691482568CD00051D4E http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/570D69C1ABBC104B482568CD0005050A http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/SongUnid/BBD16D88D89B96FC482568CD000AD0AB now that's how to run a revolution, but this is just poetry, a dream. or maybe my name's right...tom |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There's a definite theme of intense rebuttal in this piece. I hope we'll remain friends. Powerful work! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hmmmm, don't really know where you're coming from nor for certain where you're going, but by this powerful piece, I know you're on the move! Nah, I'm not going to check out the songs, I'm a fuddy-duddy. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
read your poem an also the song lyrics an must say even though i dont know this artist i like some of the lyrics an i really like your original poem you have written with the inspiration from those songs |
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