Open Poetry #14 |
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On Letting in the Night |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL ![]() |
An open curtain and an ocean breeze, Blowing from miles away, But yet still filling me. As the day slowly paces away, The clouds take their decided place in the sky. While children play, Their echos and voices fill my living room. Other people on other balconies, Smoking their cigarettes, Anticipating the night as much as I, Saying goodbye to the day in solemn sky staring eagerness. There is a tenderness with which the night relieves the day, And there is a soft colored awe that I reward myself with, When the touch of the breeze sweetly taints my falling spirit. Cypress trees whisper their softness, While the ever constant wind tousles the treetops, Like grandfathers affectionately rubbing a youngster's head. A lady on her balcony watering her plants, Seems to watch my gaze, And I wonder if she ponders the change as much as I do. Matters not.. For the climate is moderately warm and cool, And the breeze creeps in through an open door, And trickles into my senses, Warming my heart and my inspirations. The night slowly overtakes the day, And I feel my soul being soaked in awe, As I transform into an exquisite mood of thankfulness. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
This warms my heart..I enjoyed it very much. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TemptyOne~ I really liked this line of thought - 'There is a tenderness with which the night relieves the day' Yes ... and we welcome it's coming. The aura of the sunset plays gently on the shore of thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW temptress....this is so refreshing to read.... ![]() ![]() Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
The transisition is always magical, and I love writing about it as much as I enjoy reading all of your comments about it. Thank you. |
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