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In Love's Relate
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In Love's Relate |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In Love's Relate ~*Marge Tindal*~  In love's relate ~ anticipate Seek of fate ~ contemplate Soar of wing ~ beckoning Celestial sing ~ chorusing Jubilate in love's relate ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SUPERB! 1DERFUL! And I get to be the first to comment instead of number 37  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
well i get to be second an i must say this is magnificent!! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Fantastic! Marge. and the pic just adds with the rolling thunder of your words...gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ LOL ! Thank you, QuickDrawMcGraw ! KelliKay~ Thanks so much. Logan~ Thank you for hearing the gentle thunder~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Shall I say this was "electrifying?", nope, then how about, "pyrotechnically awakening?" Ah, but this was "charged" with "lightning" thoughts, that "charged" my little poetic heart! You think I liked it? |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was great! Good job! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful rhyme scheme Marge, I loved the flow and your sentiments in this treasure! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ I LOVE pyrotechnical awakening ... cool ! Iffen I had to hazard a guess ... I might think ya' liked it !  Sandra~ Thank you so much. Kit~ You're a doll ! Thanks ever so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl you've done it again, this is outstanding, what a beautiful picture you've painted here love. Utterly fabulous writing and I love the picture You have such a wonderful talent dear sister and this is excellent Love you always Take care of you Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ You're such a dear heart ... love you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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