Open Poetry #14 |
Did you ever hear my song |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Did you ever hear my song melody of memories gone some I do pity some I do not some are fading some are hot When I sit here by myself thinking back and I am twelf just exploring beyond my home on a leash but space to roam memories I do have plenty thinking back and I am twenty left my home three years before studies, partying and living fast shame, but those days didn't last memories are good and worthy thinking back and I am thirty got me a second girl that year life seemed good, nothing to fear I wrote my song I did not wait thinking back I am fourtyeight a time of sorrow passed me by when I remember I just sigh life goes on while stirring it's mix thinking now and I am fiftysix still have some melodies to invent of memories long gone at the end A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i so enjoyed your trip through the past this is amazing an your talent will last your one of the finest poets ive ever read these wonderful thoughts fill your head your write them down an well its a real pleasure to all of us,enough said.. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
ahh, at sixty two, I know what you say, and give you the reasurrance that the best tis yet to come...how nice, how lovely the memories..well done....gentle smile |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
A man without memories is dead. Thusly, we celebrate with you the marvelous memories within your poetry. Thank you. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Titia--Beautiful melody of memories. It carries the reader very gracefully. PM |
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