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Nothing Left of You
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Nothing Left of You |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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You knew I’d cry... You knew I’d beg for one more try... And all this time, I think you really knew... That we were wrong... And never meant to last too long... So, now this ache might break my soul in two... Sitting here, and wondering why you treated me this way... I would have given you my world, if only you had stayed... The lonliness I feel right now can’t hide the bitter truth... I’ll feel this way until the day there’s nothing left of you... You knew my pain... You left me standing in the rain... And disappeared just when I needed you... With no goodbye... You never gave me reasons why this heart of mine should break this way for you... And now I know that I will never be in love again... You took away my hopes and dreams, and left me at the end... You never even sent me one last kiss to see me through... But one day I’ll be done, and there’ll be nothing left of you... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes the past becomes the past and new experiences await our desires...James |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, Such a painful poem, my friend. Always believe in yourself and know that life is one of many steps. Never close your heart to love, for it awaits you somewhere in this journey. (((hugs))) to you. Michael Proust- |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
enjoyed your poem very much will read more of you for sure  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...James... Sometimes it is hard to move on, even though we know there may be new things ahead. It's even harder when the last experience had no closure, no goodbye. Thank you... ...Michael... Thank you, and it's nice to know a friend is there who understands... ...Watersign6... There will be more, many more, and I look forward to reading more of yours, also... ~~~  ~~~The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"And now I know that I will never be in love again..." that is till the next one comes to capture your heart. Nothing sadder than having your heart broke while standing in the rain. I like how you wrote this, just feel bad it had to happen to you. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
No justice in love, is there... Though sad subject (for you that is) I love the way you wrote it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, so full of ache, but, so powerfully expressed, I relate so much to this! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Many Many hugs to you - your heart is so very sweet and you are such a good person. Keep your chin up - something good will happen to you. I will send an angel to help you through. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...inot2B... Yet something about the rain is healing, it cleanses somehow. I thank you for reading, and your nice reply!! ...Titia... Oh, you are so right...love and justice don't seem to take to each other...Hmmmm...there's another poem in there!! Thank you so much!! ...Melissa... I guess sometimes it's easier to express pain, than it is joy. Now, why that is, I don't know, because they are both powerful emotions. Thank you!! ...Ariana... Oh, thank you, my friend...I would appreciate the company of an angel...although I have run into several right here at Passions...you included!! ~~~ Sunny ~~~ The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, you know that I agree with the pain here, and have felt it as well. But we know now that this is not ended, and I am so happy for you. Very compelling writing. Luv Sandra |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a sorrowful and touching piece Sunny ... you've captured the emotion very well within these words, many hugs to you for this tender write. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is so good. I can feel your pain thru your words. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well this doesn't sound like a very nice way to be treated for such a lovely lady! (((((((((((hug)))))))))))) Kathleen Blake |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
quote: ...except the strength I will gain in living through such great pain and with it I will one day find one who gives me such peace of mind... and you will too  |
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