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Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-01 11:02 AM

indicative sun
orange veils cling to lava
black with treachery

"I am not now that which I have been."

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-06-01 11:08 AM

this is stunning!!!!!!!! :applause:

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-01 11:10 AM

May I steal your last line

I love it.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-06-01 04:18 PM

Irish Rose: thank you so very much for being part of my cheer leading section. It gives be much pleasure to write for an appreciative audience.

Interloper: the greatest compliment is someone who steals your lines. Take my line, please.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-06-01 04:36 PM

Mabe: AWESOME...you be a good haiku maker girl!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

~*~Please remember to tell someone you love them today~*~

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-06-01 04:40 PM

Wonderful Haiku. Capitally done.

Poeminister

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2001-06-01 05:10 PM

You get an "A" for this one.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

7 posted 2001-06-01 05:51 PM

i love it

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-06-01 06:21 PM

Beautiful contrast and good writing!

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

9 posted 2001-06-01 08:35 PM

Mysteria: i think perhaps haiku for me is similar to your ability to rhyme. For me it is innate.

Poeminister and Watersign6: thank you so much for the appreciation of short form.

Auguste: an "a" coming from you is to be prized.

Ethome: thank you. So many American writers of haiku do note appreciate the cutting line of classical haiku. Your observation is most gracious.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-06-02 12:18 PM

Julian~
A softly whispered WOW.

You capture Haiku with a poetic flashbulb of the moment.
Nice !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

11 posted 2001-06-02 12:45 PM

Marge: thank you so very much. You know me, I can't pass up a good picture.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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