Open Poetry #14 |
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Inspired By (Part 1, Kari I said I was feeling better ) |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England ![]() |
Inspired By (Part 1, Kari see I told you I was feeling better) Some say her words are nothing but written tears Understanding has she of the emptiness of years Nothing is beyond her capabilities to write beauty Soothing our souls with endlessly perfect poetry Her breath caresses our hearts with her tender touch In our souls we understand that joy to which we all clutch Never ending is her capacity to love and then soar Easy to see why Kari I'm always saying give me more May the day never come when you’re not near to me Ah, for what would my eyes see if denied your poetry Roaming your spirit is there communing with perfect peace Gaining an insight into your heart where all our strivings cease Inspiring yes you are, and so very much more you are to me Eternally you are my sister of heart, gift me with your poetry Seldom is seen the wisdom of the ages past in poetry so pure E asily her words like waves lap against our hearts wide shore Absolutely perfect, reading her works is for me no hard chore Balladeer my friend, you are one of those poets who have scope Always your words inspire me with delight and fill me with hope Late at night as the shadows lengthen and then fall across my screen Light is brought by your words as I understand what you mean All your poetry is excellent and you always strike a chord with me 'Deer you are magical you have such a way of writing pure poetry Ever I'm spellbound you know how to write the soul that lives within Excellently portrayed you paint the words that brush against my skin Really ‘Deer dear I love your work, inspiration come on ‘Deer enter in Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 06-01-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Mushy this is very clever and well written. You're just a delight to read! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Brave tribute and well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very clever and I really enjoyed this, Marsha!!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
An acrostic dedication to fine poets: can it get any better? I doubt it but I want more. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well aren't you the clever one....here I deal with candies...and you serve up marzipan [much harder to make and a bit more of a delicacy, don't y'know!] |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and you said you'd never be that good. . . HAH!!! ![]() great job love. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow! That was great - hope you keep going. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mushy, you are so SWEET! Thank you for such wonderful words and, with Sunshine, Marge and SEA on top of me, I am in heaven here!! ![]() My sincere thanks, bubbly one ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ Y es, as suspected O penly penned through your rhyme U nderlying beauty from you time after time R hyme is sung O ver and over so tender C atching us in your K arma of sweetest render You are so special, sweet sister of my heart. I love you. Heck, we ALL love you ! ! LOL @ Balladeer ! Why IS that man smiling ? ! ![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh you...this is great lil one |
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