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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-20 04:54 PM

Dream Play

Tonight I play in dreams
testing them for any openings to the real.
Pressing, I feel a softness at times
that seems to give way if only...
To chance the real, means to beware
of all that comes with loving:
heartache, disappointments,
misunderstandings.

Tonight I play in dreams
hoping they provide a safe keeping
of my heart, protecting it,
allowing it to expand, awakening it
to new discoveries,
learning to adjust to the darkness,
when the moon hides from the stars
leaving an emptiness on the night seas.

Tonight I play in dreams
viewing the depths of warmth
in eyes that cry out...in silent lips
that rise in kisses to meet desire,
in arms that heat with each touch,
searing their imprints to last the night.

Tonight I play in dreams
hoping to get them right...

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-05-20 05:01 PM

Nakd,
Happy dreaming excellent write. Sy

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-05-20 05:08 PM

thanx for sharing your happy dreams

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-20 06:28 PM

I can almost picture you composing this one, Maureen, it's so natural, the flow and meter.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2001-06-10 11:03 PM

Maureen,

i think this is an unique and original way to show the reader familiar feelings...well done

Tonight i play in dreams

i wont forget such a line in a hurry...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-06-11 12:06 PM

Sy,
oh for a happy dream to reach my pillowed thoughts *s
thank you

Interloper
thank you for stopping to read my words.

Kathleen,
thank you, you are a sweetie and a good friend.
M

faterider
unique? I have been called that before..usually not meant to be pleasant though *s thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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