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Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

0 posted 2001-05-31 05:03 PM

"Dreams of You"

all these thoughts come rushing in
makes me dream of you again
sweet sensations I've never known
my love for you I've never shown
If you were here I know
I'd lose my fear an myself in less than a year
with you I'd never be alone
with you I'd feel right at home
I'm in heaven,on cloud nine
everytime I see you in my mind
these dreams of you
dissapear into the morning haze
I wanna reach across the ocean
an hold you close to me
I wanna kiss you so gently
like the rain kisses the sea
I wanna be with you every second
just to hold your hand
I wanna love you with all my heart
an hope my mind can understand

(c)2001 Kelli Kay

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-31 05:47 PM

the heart is overriding the heart on this one!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-05-31 05:58 PM

Yes its nice to have someone special close at hand to talk to and touch and kiss...James

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-05-31 06:23 PM

Ain't love grand?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-05-31 09:29 PM

Irish Rose,James an Interloper thanks for taking time to read this one an for the nice comments on it,i appreciate it

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

5 posted 2001-06-01 06:22 PM

Whatever the distance true lovers are only a heartbeat and a memory away. I enjoyed this very much, written with great sentiment and conviction. Thank you for posting.

Regards,
Olias.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2001-06-01 06:44 PM

This is just lovely.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

7 posted 2001-06-01 06:47 PM

Olias an Michael,thank you,i am happy knowing you enjoyed my writing here,i am finding so many amazing lovely poets here

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-02 10:45 AM

I know this well. . . you've captured it here wonderfully. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

9 posted 2001-06-02 10:49 AM

Ahh, dreams and thoughts are what makes the soul live and sing..very nice...gentle smile

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

10 posted 2001-06-02 11:07 AM

Sven an Logan,thanks you make me feel like this

with your kind words here.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2001-06-02 12:44 PM

Watersign6,
Seems like pretty plain talk to me. I think I get the idea. Sy

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2001-06-02 12:47 PM

Wow! There's a lot of love and devotion in this poem! I'm like Seymour...I get the picture very clearly!

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

13 posted 2001-06-02 02:47 PM

I wanna love you with all my heart
an hope my mind can understand

What all lovers wish for, something so simple and yet some people find it so hard to give. Sounds like you got a bad case of true love, no cure for that I am afraid.
enjoyed the read,
Kelli

[This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 06-02-2001).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

14 posted 2001-06-02 02:50 PM

filled with longing

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

15 posted 2001-06-02 06:35 PM

Seymour,thank you i appreciate your reading
my poems

ethome-i am happy you read my poems an reply
it means alot to me

Brian

yes,i wrote it as true love
an am happy you like that last line
VAS

thanks for taking time to read mine
it is deeply appreciated

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

16 posted 2001-06-03 05:07 PM

Hold onto this love...sounds quite special!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

17 posted 2001-06-09 11:45 PM

kel,
beautiful work!! *sighs* just lovely

take care.
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

18 posted 2001-06-12 08:03 AM

JLR- i will try to hold on when i find it again,right now we are remaining great friends since we live so far away.

Aimster-

so happy to see you reading this one and enjoying it.

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