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Truth Be Told............
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Truth Be Told............ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Behind your back......words are spoken rumors are spread......hearts get broken Quiet inuendo......lead to lies exaggerated truths......and someone cries Jealousy calls......wants your believing twisted facts......sly deceiving Assumed knowledge......complete fabracation fools believe......with no verification Gossip flies......on ignorance wings trust is lost......and evil sings Yet truth has strength......and will defy even the best......well crafted lie ~SEA~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA, Truth will always eventually emerge to conquor all falsehoods. Wonderful write. PM |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
All truths on both sides. Clever!! Melton [This message has been edited by 2dalimit (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM~ always....thank you  2dalimit~thanks and I have no idea really....I have seen this before, I think it's called couplings? Not sure.....if anyone else knows, please do tell ~SEA |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very nicely written I'm adding this to my library! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, Truth will always be the defeat of lies. I love this one dear heart, truly you have a perfect gift. (Yes love still at home sick, sans voice, so I can't shout at those awful docs. But other than a sore throat I'm fine truly.) You really do write the best couplings and YOU know I love this don't you, Good Love and warm stuff take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Yet truth has strength......and will defy even the best......well crafted lie well said, enjoyed the read. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this is absolutely one of my favorites,you write so well,i love it,thank you for sharing your talent here |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Bravo!! Bravo!! Well done. A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great job with this one SEA. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ 'fools believe' 'Nuff said ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Amen! It does sometimes take truth a good deal longer to win...case in point, we're all still here on this planet...but win it will in the end. Powerful piece calling readers to seek the truth before spreading the word/words. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its always harder to see the truth...its usually boring...hang in there baby girl...the ones who count know the truth...the others dont matter anyways |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm. I hear echoes of another such work in the not too distant past ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ truth reigns supreme though lies are much tastier fools rush to believe ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's when you aren't given a chance to explain that it really hurts, write on Kathleen Blake |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully said Susan ... the truth has a habit of getting lost amongst the gossip, well stated! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, I really like this especially the last two line.... my high school had a latin statement under its emblem (that I can't remember the latin for) it stated that "Truth will win" or "Truth will be Victorious".... thanks for the reminder. Parker Now i'm heading off to adult I'm hearing about another truth in there.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank God for the truth Sea! If it wasn't for that then what would we have? The first verses are very thought provoking and proof of the fact that all should loving cautious......great poem!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You're so right there. Gossip is so easy believed and spread so quickly, while thruth sometimes is hard to believe, but will get through in the end. I know, I've been there. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"Yet truth has strength......and will defy even the best......well crafted lie" No doubt about that! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sea, from your loving heart you share with us this poem of which I enjoyed reading... Hugs2Usweetie *~coco~* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
AMEN!...And well said too Sea! If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ignore the ignorant. Truth will out. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
SEA: Wonderful writing! I loved this piece - Bravo Bella!  Roniece.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes..truth at times is so much harder to accept than lies..and so often the lies are more exciting.. I ejoyed the poem..and the message!! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
We all see it in everyday life but sometimes the truth by others will not be accepted. Thought of friends, some not to be The truth through flaw of they we see Nice poem, really enjoyed it and so true. Keep writing. Rick |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amen! Sing it loud and proud! Excellent writing Take care, Melissa~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Beautiful.........TRUTH |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Nicely done SEA... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, I never lie. Though the truth has cost me a few friends and angered a few others, I refuse to allow myself to be known as either a gossip or a liar. When all is said and done, TRUTH is always the victor. Well done, my friend. An EXCELLENT poem. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very well done SEA. Wonderful sentiments. of course you realise truth will not always emerge triumphant? many are the lies that have spread across the world over the years that are now accepted as truths. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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