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Under The Sea |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Under The Sea By: Noah Eaton 5/20/01 Under the sea I dance with a heavenly mermaid With long brown hair sparkling with pearls down her back Gorgeous sapphire fins shimmering with resemblance of the sky and her eyes Soft velvet lips swaying in gypsy dance My tuxedo is a warm heart beating with affection and a pair of swim trunks I hold her hand, diving with her onto the pearl-tile Atlantis floor Paying our tickets at the door, I put my arm around her back, swimming into the briny ballroom Listening to the mermaid choir sing romance, as I stare into my girls eyes Holding her soft velvet hands, fingers entwined gently, we sway gently in this turquoise and indigo coral reef Fuchsia roses budding all across the palace walls, sighing in loves enchantment, as stained glass windows reflect rainbow fantasies We smile looking at each other, helping follow the rhythm of the dance She giggles softly delightedly, enjoying this spotlight dance We spend a whole hour dancing together, feeling happier every second She laughs in complete happiness, saying she is having the time of her life I swing with her in aquatic flamenco dance, spinning around in hurricane pirouette All a sudden a soft blue light falls upon the two of us alone, as soft jazz begins to play We hug each other close, her head over my shoulder, moaning in delight She tells me this is her favorite song as I can’t stop thinking about her hearing the seductive jazz Slowly twirling on the dance floor, we face each other again, looking into each others eyes deeply And she reaches her hand out to caress my cheek, dragging her fingers down to my neck, stroking with passion I say the heavenly three words to her and she wraps her fingers around my neck and I rest my hands on her shoulders And we gently kiss each other in the bright light, as pearl flashes explode around us Fairies of the ocean rush in from the abandoned ark inn, spinning around us, lighting our kiss We moan in beautiful joy, bending in to attach my lips with hers again Floating up to the surface of the ocean, our lips slowly separate, floating with the waves to the seashore of Lovers Lagoon Shaded by palmetto gardens and rose bushes, swaying in the soft monsoon winds under the blue moonlight And she slowly lays me on the sand where the water kisses the shore, and I lay my hands on her Under the moonlight, I look at her soft fair face, and she says, “I want to be yours forever, my love…hold me!” I hold her close, touching her smooth skin, feeling the curving ripples of her body I embrace her on the beach sand, making love to her, balming together as one under the blushing melting ala mode moon Feeling her naked body, her heart attached to mine, throbbing softly in rhythm of the prom dance My lips melt into hers, kissing her seemingly eternally, passion surging like the tidal waves through nighttime, splashing against our bodies Slowly our lips detach, she breathes the pleasing salty air, feeling her warm breath flood my body Smiling I euphoria holding the angel of my life close, to forever dance the prom of eternity with For tonight we danced under the sea, I danced with my mermaid love I pull her down close to me again to kiss her again, as we rest together on the tropical beachside, humming twenty thousand sonnets from the sea to our hearts… |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
noah, I have always found mermaids fascinating, and I love the sea...this one was worth the time it took to read, especially this late at night when I'm not myself at all. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Are you going to share the location of Atlantis?  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
under the sea.....so many precious treasures to explore....but well you've found one....your heavenly mermaid.... love it Charisma |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
lovely just lovely |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed the beauty of your poem Noah...James |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Impressive painting your words weaved. Romantic artistry carries me . |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh, to have your young vivid imagination. This is quite a wonderfully expressive piece. Joyce |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
an awesome write you weaved. enjoyed the read. Life is to short to not appreciate all of nature's gifts. As I sit & ponder in awe - quietly. [This message has been edited by latin passion (edited 06-02-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Thank you all for your beautiful comments! Sorry I haven't been around much ina while, I'm just finishing exams and getting over a depression, but I am recovering and will be back to again grace your beautiful words! I'm sorry I haven't been able to comment barely either, I have been so busy with school, please forgive me. Though I've never found Atlantis, just finding it in my imagination is extraordinary to me. But when I do find it, I'll let you all know! (winks) I have a big crush on mermaids; as a child I used to read children's books and would always smile looking at the pictures of mermaids, and now I dream of them all the time. (smiles) Thank you all for your wonderful comments! I love you all! MNay love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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