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Open Poetry #14

Time Passes By

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-05-31 10:38 AM

Oh
How quickly does
The time passes by,
It has been long time,
I haven't seen you for a while,
Now,
Since you are not here with me,
you come Into my mind,
And see a picture of us together,
Wonder If you are hinking of me
As I am thinking of you,
Yes,
I Is for sure that
time passes b quicky,
you may count the hours
As they go by slowly,
Time passes by,
You never come to know,
when time passes by,
you wait for the next day,
to arrive,
when the time passes by,
Summer comes along,
When the heart carry on
with the time,
Then slowly summer goes by,
when It Is time
for rain and pain and sorrow
melts away
quickly
as we count the hours
And time does go by quickly,
As time passes by.....
Maybe,
Lord will find us toghether
someday

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-05-31 10:40 AM

Very nice work. Nicely flowing and very enjoyable!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-06-02 05:12 PM

if only we could make it stop when we wanted to. . .

loved this one my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-06-03 01:45 AM

Nicely expressed. Enjoyed this read.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

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